Student Writing Samples
Students were asked to write short paragraphs based on a prompt they selected from a list. They had to incorporate examples of the stative passive in their writing.
Amazing Vacation in Greece by Jenny, Tim, Marlon, & Jake
Prompt: I just read about the most amazing vacation spot in the world. (be located in, be excited about, be filled with)
These days, I subscribe to a magazine about traveling. I just read an article introducing an amazing vacation in Cancun. It is located along the eastern coast of Mexico. The visitors are excited about beautiful beaches and delicious Mexican food. It is known for a great honeymoon place. Cancun is filled with many newly married couples. After I read this article, I can't wait to visit Cancun. I am going to have my next vacation in Cancun.
These days, I subscribe to a magazine about traveling. I just read an article introducing an amazing vacation in Cancun. It is located along the eastern coast of Mexico. The visitors are excited about beautiful beaches and delicious Mexican food. It is known for a great honeymoon place. Cancun is filled with many newly married couples. After I read this article, I can't wait to visit Cancun. I am going to have my next vacation in Cancun.
Amazing EDC Vacation by Vincent, Trevor, Gloria, & Lin
Prompt: I just read about the most amazing vacation spot in the world. (be located in, be excited about, be filled with)
My friend recommended going to EDC, which is located in Las Vegas Nevada, for an amazing vacation. EDC stands for Electric Daisy Carnival land. It is a music festival where music lovers gather from all over the world. There are many famous DJs from different countries coming to this festival and playing their best sets of music. People are excited about this event. They are excited not only for the music, but the attendees also can enjoy food, attractions, and watch amazing fireworks. People who go will be filled wit joy and unforgettable memories for the rest of their lives.
My friend recommended going to EDC, which is located in Las Vegas Nevada, for an amazing vacation. EDC stands for Electric Daisy Carnival land. It is a music festival where music lovers gather from all over the world. There are many famous DJs from different countries coming to this festival and playing their best sets of music. People are excited about this event. They are excited not only for the music, but the attendees also can enjoy food, attractions, and watch amazing fireworks. People who go will be filled wit joy and unforgettable memories for the rest of their lives.
Amazing Adventure by Jorge, Jay, Tee, & Emily
Prompt: My Uncle Peter told me about his adventures in the jungle. (be frightened by, be prepared for, be equipped with)
My Uncle Peter told me about his adventures in the jungle. When he was 7 years old, my grandfather, who is a botanist, took him to the Amazon Jungle. One night, Uncle Peter got lost, so he had to spend one night in the jungle. At first, he was frightened by a giant crocodile, but a monkey saved him. Milk was prepared for him by the monkey because the monkey thought Uncle Peter was associated with him. The next day, my grandfather was equipped with water and food. He found Uncle Peter in a hole with the monkey; he survived. It's amazing!
My Uncle Peter told me about his adventures in the jungle. When he was 7 years old, my grandfather, who is a botanist, took him to the Amazon Jungle. One night, Uncle Peter got lost, so he had to spend one night in the jungle. At first, he was frightened by a giant crocodile, but a monkey saved him. Milk was prepared for him by the monkey because the monkey thought Uncle Peter was associated with him. The next day, my grandfather was equipped with water and food. He found Uncle Peter in a hole with the monkey; he survived. It's amazing!
The Messy Girl by Maddux, Lucia, Mimi, & Kevin
Prompt: I am very organized, but my housemate is very messy. (be cluttered with, be filled with, be accustomed to)
I have a roommate who always annoys me because the room is cluttered with dirty clothes, socks, and trash. She seldom cleans her room. I need to help and remind her once in a while. The kitchen is filled with dirty plates well. She is accustomed to being a messy and lazy person. So, when she is busy, I am thinking of finding a new apartment for myself. I'll start to look for it next week. And I will be satisfied with the new apartment and environment. I am sure I'll be very happy. I prefer paying more money to get away from her.
I have a roommate who always annoys me because the room is cluttered with dirty clothes, socks, and trash. She seldom cleans her room. I need to help and remind her once in a while. The kitchen is filled with dirty plates well. She is accustomed to being a messy and lazy person. So, when she is busy, I am thinking of finding a new apartment for myself. I'll start to look for it next week. And I will be satisfied with the new apartment and environment. I am sure I'll be very happy. I prefer paying more money to get away from her.
My Uncle Peter by Richard, Antonio, Luis, & Arella
Prompt: My Uncle Peter told me about his adventures in the jungle. (be frightened by, be prepared for, be equipped with)
My Uncle Peter is an adventurer who likes to travel around the world. One year ago, he traveled to the Amazon Jungle. Before he set out, he had to prepare for this adventure for a couple of months because the jungle is very dangerous. When he arrived in Brazil, he rented a boat and was equipped with all the necessary stuff. On the next day, he took the boat down the Amazon River into the jungle. At first, the river's surface was very peaceful. Suddenly, there was a very big monster jumping from the river. It opened its large mouth rushing at my uncle. My uncle was frightened by it very much. So he turned his boat and escaped back quickly.
My Uncle Peter is an adventurer who likes to travel around the world. One year ago, he traveled to the Amazon Jungle. Before he set out, he had to prepare for this adventure for a couple of months because the jungle is very dangerous. When he arrived in Brazil, he rented a boat and was equipped with all the necessary stuff. On the next day, he took the boat down the Amazon River into the jungle. At first, the river's surface was very peaceful. Suddenly, there was a very big monster jumping from the river. It opened its large mouth rushing at my uncle. My uncle was frightened by it very much. So he turned his boat and escaped back quickly.
Our Teacher, The Professional Killer? by Luciano, Larisa, Wei Li, & Mengwei
Prompt: We just learned that our professor used to be a criminal. (be connected to, be associated with, be involved in)
Our ESL Teacher was known for her kindness and passion. But one day, we saw she was arguing with a student in the parking lot. After that day, that student never showed up again. Our teacher was the last one with him. So she was involved in the disappearance of that student. After the police's investigation, they found another student had received the last text from the student who disappeared. The text message said, "Help! Our teacher wants..." The student who received the last text was worried about the student who had disappeared. Then the police went to our teacher's house and found one of her t-shirts was covered with blood. Is she the killer? We'll never know.
Our ESL Teacher was known for her kindness and passion. But one day, we saw she was arguing with a student in the parking lot. After that day, that student never showed up again. Our teacher was the last one with him. So she was involved in the disappearance of that student. After the police's investigation, they found another student had received the last text from the student who disappeared. The text message said, "Help! Our teacher wants..." The student who received the last text was worried about the student who had disappeared. Then the police went to our teacher's house and found one of her t-shirts was covered with blood. Is she the killer? We'll never know.